现象
Relocate to cities 搬去城市
A growing population 不断增长的人口
Population expansion/explosion 人口扩张/爆炸
Population is mobile 人口流动大
valuable services / essential services 基础设施
city dweller(s) 城市居民
成因
declining agricultural population 务农人口减少
developmental imbalance between cities and the countryside 发展不平衡
the income gap between urban and rural residents 收入差距
in search of job/employment opportunities 找工作
cities offer higher standard of living 高水平生活
a lack of well-developed infrastructure基础设施不完善
be allowed lower access to education = be likely to be poorly educated 教育
medical resources concentrated in cities 医疗
electricity and fuel supply能源
影响
优点
transfer excessing agricultural labors
more job opportunities, higher income 就业机会多,收入高
better living conditions and infrastructures (medical care, traffic, education, entertainment)交通、教育、医疗、娱乐等基础设施完善
prompt economic development of whole society 经济发展
push the industrialization process 工业化进程
问题
put pressure on 带来压力(不要用bring)
keep pace with the demand 满足需求
reduce the quality of life
low-income people
人文:
cost of living is higher in urban than that in rural areas
fast-paced life / lack a sense of community / loss of community spirit and values / life can be extremely stressful
人们不会有社区的感觉,人与人之间的关系比较短暂,社区的团结和价值不复存在
社会:
housing shortage 住房紧缺
cannot afford house ownership 买不起房子
widen the gap between the rich and the poor
problems like traffic congestion and crime
rising rate of crime, unstable society
increasing mobility of population, high mobility of populations 大量的流动人口会导致犯罪率上升,影响社会稳定
经济:
increased infrastructure costs人口增加导致基础设施的费用增加(住房、医疗、教育等等)
facilities like water supplies and public transport cannot cope with the demands from increased population
环境:
Necessities are provided but at the cost of the environment
Cities are sometimes described as “metallic forest”
monotonous suburban landscapes ≈ eyesore [C](建筑等)丑东西
traffic congestion 交通堵塞
delay the delivery of goods and services 影响工作效率,延误商品和服务的输送
口语Part 3练习:
Question: What are some of the serious problems associated with living in big cities?
结构 | 思路 | Collocations |
Argument 1 | 主要问题是大城市日益拥挤 | |
How Come | 很多人搬去大城市寻求就业机会 | |
So What 1 | 城市没有足够的设施去匹配需求 | |
So What 2 | 这会降低很多城市居民的生活质量,比如很多人买不起房 | |
Argument 2 | 不断增长的人口也给城市的基础建设带来压力 | |
Example | 公共交通服务会被过度使用 | |
So What | 交通费会涨,低收入人群最容易受到影响 |
练习一下下面的回答,说到熟练为止:
观点1:The main problem is that cities are increasingly crowded.
原因:Many people have relocated to large cities in search of employment opportunities.
结果1:Cities do not have facilities to keep pace with the demand.
结果2:This can reduce the quality of life of many city dwellers because many people are not able to afford housing ownership.
观点2:A growing population also puts pressure on the city’s infrastructure.
举例:The public transport service, for example, will be overused.
结果:Transport costs will also increase, and low-income people will be among the most affected.
解决方法
人文
保持当地的城市风貌和文化protect the local landscape and culture
community councils, take part in community activities
环境:
保护和提升自然和文化资源preserve/conserve and enhance natural and cultural resources in cities
使人们具有更强的环保意识 raise awareness / awareness campaigns
社会:
发展甚础设施的建设upgrade infrastructures, roads, streets, rapid transit system, telecommunications
develop policies to boost rural development, create employment opportunities, raise income
高层建筑:High-rise buildings, which make most use of land and space, can help solve the overcrowding problems.
结构 | 思路 | Collocations |
Argument 1 | 政府应该首先密切关注城市规划 | Urban planning |
举例 | 在人口密集的城市,政府可以重新开发破旧的老城市区域 | Redevelop run-down urban areas |
结果 | 从而为住宅楼的建设腾出空间 | Make room for, residential buildings / dwellings |
Argument 2 | 政府同样可以鼓励居民搬到郊区或村庄 | Move to suburbs or rural areas |
结果 | 这个政策可以缓解城市住房市场的压力 | Alleviate the pressure, the housing market |
解释 | 这些可以通过将一些产业和工作岗位迁到乡镇来实现 | Provincial towns |
Argument 3 | 提供“公租房” | State housing |
解释 | 为不能负担房租/房价的弱势群体提供免费/低价住房 | Disadvantaged people |
举例 | 政府可以补贴开发商建造高层建筑 | Housing developers, high-rise buildings |
结果1 | 这些高层住房可以在低建筑物密度社区,容纳尽可能多的人 | Low-density neighborhoods/communities |
结果2 | 这些政策在土地稀缺的城市非常有效,这些城市不能满足对住房日益增长的需求 | In land-scarce cities, meet the growing demand for |
例题1:The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in cities are facing with? Give solutions to these problems.
例题2:The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the most serious problems? How to solve them?
例题3:Some findings have revealed that cities around the world are growing large. Could you outline the possible causes and predict consequences?
例题4:Today, the qualities of life of people in big cities are worse. What causes of this problem? Any measures should be taken to solve it?
例题5:In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of large cities and into regional areas. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?
例题6:As traffic and accommodation problems are increasing in large cities, the government encourages businesses move to the rural area. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantage?
The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken to solve this problem?
Nowadays, an increased number of people born in the boondocks choose to relocate their residence and careers to neighboring cities or flock into / flood in far-off metropolises in search of more favorable working opportunities and living conditions. In my opinion, this trend will pose threat to both cities and country areas though.
In terms of the problems confronting cities, a large influx of rural migrants puts the cities’ facilities and housing under huge pressure. Precisely, the city’s facilities cannot satisfy the growing demand for clean water and sanitation. In addition, the limited land resources cannot keep the pace with increasing population, especially in some land-scarce places. Those newcomers who fail to afford house ownership may live in the slums/favela and withstand poor living conditions. With primitive sanitation, people are more likely to contract diseases, like malaria, dengue, or cholera.
Correspondingly, cities’ growing population means the number of labor workers in rural areas is decreasing. It is because urban areas can provide more job opportunities to young people than the countryside does. As a result, many ambitious graduates, especially those who were born in agricultural areas while have received higher education in cities, would rather choose to find employment and move to cities than go back to the countryside. The deficiency of labor impedes the economic development in rural communities, consequently aggravating the imbalance of development between rural and urban areas.
To solve the problem lying in cities’ sanitation caused by the mass migration, the municipal council can build up more facilities like water cleaning machines and sanitation stations to satisfy the huge demand for basic necessities. Besides, the authorities can also build more high-rise apartments, creating a vertical city, to relieve the shortage of lands and the overcrowding problem. As for the problem of the shortage of manpower in agricultural areas, industries can be encouraged to be relocated from cities to rural areas and therefore, these industries will attract the young people who have decided to settle down in cities to come back to the country areas again. In this way, the economic gap between urban and agricultural areas will be closed.
介绍段:Report :1. 找新主语改写原题背景 + 2. 承上启下
With modern buildings being increasingly analogous with/to one another, the idea for city planning has gradually converged, and the distinctions among the cultures which used to be contained in various buildings are being blurred. In my opinion, the development of modern civil engineering should be responsible for the convergence/resemblance in the architectural field.
主体段A:原因
Technological advancement gives birth to standardized paradigms for constructing urban buildings. In order to enhance efficiency and productivity, when there is an already-existing optimal remedy for building and planning cities, the easiest choice to make is to copy and paste the successful metropolises’ experience of city construction. Hence, standardized and universal urban construction is widely employed worldwide. For example, Chinese traditional wooden buildings have been replaced by reinforced concrete structures; Beijing’s Ring Road System has worked effectively in Wuhan’s urban construction. This has also happened universally. Besides, modernized techniques give birth to vertical cities to accommodate a larger urban population, and therefore, skyscrapers, for instance, have grown in number everywhere, which has developed increasingly uniform architectural styles.
主体段B:优缺点
On the other hand, despite the seemingly prosperous development of architecture, the gradual convergence of buildings and cities causes inconvenience to urban dwellers’ life and visitors’ tours. There are similar streets, junctions, and edifices that would confuse the locals or even get them lost; also, there is a lack of distinctive landmarks or historic attractions in a concrete jungle, which would definitely dampen any tourist’s enthusiasm/passion for visiting. In the long run, the city would not only arouse antipathy from urban inhabitants but also become indistinctive or even an eyesore, being negligible in the world. 【总分总结构】
From a more macro and societal perspective, the phenomenon damages cultural diversity. As time went by, numerous historic buildings and architectural styles have been ushered out by modern high-rise buildings. This process of the replacement is irreversible, which means the historic buildings (e.g. Hanging Gardens of Babylon, quadrangle dwellings of China, and Japanese wooden pagodas), along with their cultural connotations, would not resurge once they were gone.
总结段:万能的“虽然但是”
To put it in a nutshell, the global similarity of buildings and city planning witness the development of modern technology, but it is worth mentioning that under/in the circumstances, residents’ life and local tourism will be detrimentally affected while the cultural diversity would not be properly preserved/maintained/protected.