本周无考试,所以我们整点特殊的活。
我经常提到好作文改出来,今天我将通过一篇准范文(改进的学生习作)为大家展示我一般是如何帮学生升级他们的习作。
先上题目
Many filmmakers make movies based on books. some people prefer to read the book before they watch the movie, while other people prefer to watch the movie before they read the book. which one do you prefer?
最终成文
People’s demands for spiritual and sensual feasts are increasing. There is a surge for filmmakers to adapt some movies from books. Faced with these films, people's reactions vary. Some tend to read the book before watching the movie; others are more willing to enjoy the thrill over the film. I would go for the movie. My reasons are as follows.
First, watching the movie is more timesaving than reading the book. I mean that most of us, ordinary people, read novels or watch movies just for fun. However, reading books usually cost more time than watching movies. I myself, for example, am a great fan of 'the Shawshank redemption'. I watched the movie as soon as it was released. I liked it so much that I decided to read the novel. Unfortunately, a month later, I gave up, since there are too many details in the book and I was therefore reluctant to read on. I mean I could sit there watching the film for hours, but I just cannot do the same for the reading task.
In addition, the experience of movie watching could be better than simple book reading. The CGI effects and ultimate landscape design make up an audio-visual feast for the audience. In contrast, the process of reading is often tedious and dull. My father is a history buff. He always devotes his spare time to reading historical books. But once he told me that he was attracted by ‘Brave Heart’, a movie about the history of England. Since then my father started to stick himself in front of the TV and watch TV series or movies on history.
Fiction enthusiasts might argue that movies sometimes are not loyal to the content of original book or blame the film director for adapting the book in order to have a better effect. However, I still tend to believe that most of us are visual animals. We tend to accept and welcome what is visually “cool” to us. After all, people prefer to talk about how cool Matt Damon looks in the film other than how brilliant an agent Jason Bourne is.
I never reject instant entertainment. Therefore, I always choose those that cost me the least time and get me the most pleasure. Call me a popcorn-freak, but I just like it that way.
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